Cheating
Rich and handsome! What a combination!
“If only…” A fleeting thought; enough to make her feel guilty.
She turned and asked her husband, “On seeing a rich and attractive guy, if I thought ‘if only…’ is that cheating?”
“Of course not,” he replied.
Relief swept over her.
What’s the point in saying yes, he thought.
Wrote this '55 words story' for a contest. Got short-listed; but didn't get any prize. :-)
14 comments:
good one!
"what is the point!" - is very insightful.
Is this something like a 'mini-saga' competition or something? - A mini saga is a story told in exactly 50 words. Not 49 or 51 but exactly 50
check this out - http://www.lifebeyondcode.com/category/mini-saga/
Hahaha! Liked this one :D
humm, thats a good take. :))
nice.
heheh... thats nice!!!
its a good one anyways :) short and sweet!
Santosh: Thanks. :-)
Saw the Mini saga series. Quite interesting. The 55-words story writing was part of the Kala Ghoda Arts Festival, Mumbai.
Dhanya: Thanks :-)
ZiLliOnBiG: Thanks :-)
Sands: Thanks :-)
Soorya: Thanks :-)
Sandeep: Thanks :-)
ha haa... thats a good one...
and a nice 55 F built around it too :)
take care mate... cheers...
Liked that one... vry gud insight..
i can c that many ppl r doing wonders with 55 F
Arv: Thanks :-)
Devil Incarnate: After posting this, I noticed that. :-)
nice view...
loved it :)
That was a nice post Bindhu.
Thanks for the comments. My mother cooks aalo ka paratha and it comes to be like the punjabi one. She always say "experience matter".
I dont know, I think I also got the same cooking skills... kidding :)
wow, that's a nice write-up!
really good.
very poignant
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